Qin Xin

Hi Qin;

This is an important piece of activism, but I'm not clear about what the very specific project will be that you're completing for this class this semester.  is it a video showing you handing out flyers and talking to people?  If so, who will be recording you?  The specifics are what I was looking for in Part A. of the proposal.  If it is a video, you'll need to specify exactly how long it will be, and what the viewer will be looking at specifically.  What is the tone of the video?  Where will you shoot, etc.? Will you need sound equipment as well? How many people will you interview?  What sort of flyers will you produce?

For the pitch session next week I suggest that you have a very tight, very focused description of this video, answering the kinds of questions I've asked above.

Thanks!



4-4-17
Hi Qin;

You have some really good sources here about your issue, but it would be good to also include some sources about the U.S.reaction, or lack of reaction, to the Bodies exhibit which has been on display in NYC.  Your writing needs work, and I made reference to places in the Lit. Review to that effect.  I'll scan and email it to you so you can see my comments.  You don't seem to be using a correct style for offering citations within the text, which you'll also see when I email you the draft. You may want to seek assistance from the Learning Center to help you give the paper a good edit for the final version you give me in May.