I think Fair Trade Coffee is a great topic for the media activist project. I don't see what the media activism is, though. I understand that you want to partner with Fair Trade organizations, gather information about them, and compile that information in a final presentation, but that's not the kind of project I'm looking for here. For your final project I want to see how you use media to create something beyond a final presentation just for the class. Near the end of your proposal you mention something about perhaps further down the line you might produce a 30-minute commercial that empowers Third World organizations. What you if you made *that* your activist media project for this class, or something similar?
Your stance on the issue in this proposal is very clear, which is good. What I'm not getting is a sense of how you will use what you've learned about media to create something original and activist within the realm of media to make your voice heard. For example, some people are producing short videos, some are doing podcasts; some are using social media to create campaigns, etc. This is what you still need to work on: to come up with a concrete project using media, but focused on the issue of Fair Trade Coffee. Give it some more thought, and think about who you want to see it or participate in it via media.
Let me know if you have any questions!
Your literature review was great! I have no other comments to make. Well done!